New poem....the question is...is it any good?

Too many references to "heart" and "start". It's best to mention once or space them far apart. I like your tone and artistic skill, you have a talent that's not run of the mill. The first verse is a bit wobbly and mixed. "Bring forth the never ending strife" is unclear and should be fixed. Don't get me wrong, I love this piece. It sounds more like a song that will never cease.